Jun 28, 2012The tricky flashbackFlashbacks in fiction are one of those gizmos in your utility drawer that can give you grief. It’s like Gorilla Glue or razor blades....
Feb 28, 2011The Mush FactorI’m tilting at windmills here. I’m against chapters. I know you love ’em. Thus the tilting. Eventually we’ve got to make up tidy little...
Jun 17, 2010Stories and PacingPacing errors can kill your story. Repetitive, low-tension paragraphs and scenes will get you more rejections than any other writing...
Aug 29, 2008Pacing in FictionI’ve been thinking about pacing, and what a judgment call this aspect of fiction requires. Repetitive and unnecessary words, paragraphs,...